Mmmmm...I love this poem. It's simplicity and truth--who has not been in this exact situation? Wanting to be apart, separate, and even lost, without really having any clear explanation as to why. And all done in less than 25 words. I <3 this.
Thanks Mallory, that feedback and those compliments mean a lot to me.
I love that you're still writing Jake--and writing things that touch our hearts. We all need that.
Mmmmm...I love this poem. It's simplicity and truth--who has not been in this exact situation? Wanting to be apart, separate, and even lost, without really having any clear explanation as to why. And all done in less than 25 words. I <3 this.
ReplyDeleteThanks Mallory, that feedback and those compliments mean a lot to me.
ReplyDeleteI love that you're still writing Jake--and writing things that touch our hearts. We all need that.
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